Hello and welcome to Valentine’s week and today’s Hump DayHook! We have seen some interaction with vampires during recent weeks, and they
seem to be a popular choice for Valentine romances. Today I would like to offer
you a little something from the werewolves, just to shake it up a little. We
return again to the first novel in the Redcliffe series, Love Hurts, and
this one is free to view on Wattpad for a limited time only.
With that in mind, here is an excerpt where our heroine
Jessica Stone witnesses a mysterious exchange between the werewolf alpha Danny
Mason, and his lieutenant Sally Frost. At this point Jessica is not aware of
vampires and werewolves, and she has no idea of what she has gotten herself
involved in.
Danny was standing close to
Sally, and he looked quite angry and intimidating. In fact he looked different, more frightening, very like Jack had
on that morning when he pinned me in the bedroom. Sally seemed to be acting submissively to him, as though she had
done something wrong, but I couldn’t imagine what. Surely they must be a couple and they were having an
argument. But why would Danny be in the
hospital when Sally was working? He
should be at work today I knew that.
Actually he was dressed in jeans and a smart shirt rather than his usual
surfer clothes. I knew enough to see
that these were his work clothes. Maybe
he was on an investigation or something.
Mysterious happenings, aren’t they? Ha ha! Now, why not pop
over to our Hump Day Hook blog and check out some fabulous excerpts from
brilliant authors that write everything from straight romance, gay romance and
erotica, medical drama, science fiction, and a whole lot more. You can also
find us on Facebook, and join in the fun. Happy Humping, and Happy Valentine’s!
Oh, she's clueless watching their exchange. I liked the snippet a lot. Dominance and submission in a pack is fascinating.
ReplyDeleteThank you, I thought that might shake it up a bit...
DeleteI like the mystery of how what she sees puzzles and even disturbs her. She wants to make it normal, but deep inside she knows it is something unusual. I, too, want to know more about what goes on in the dynamics between Danny and Sally. Love your world.
ReplyDeleteThanks Flossie! Yes, Jessica knows something is amiss, but her human conditioning takes a while to weaken.
DeleteHmm...definitely a mystery. I love that she's watching the exchange and trying to figure it out...I'd be in her shoes too...people watching even people I know.
ReplyDeleteGreat hook
Thanks Sarah! Yes, she cannot help herself with the Mason brothers...
DeleteYou know it's a good hook when you want to know more and are asking questions as you read it!
ReplyDeleteNice!
Cheers! I love to throw in a little mystery and intrigue now and again.
DeleteGreat job.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteVery interesting from her POV! Great hook! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat hook - and I love that image, too.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteHaha! She's trying to come up with reasonable explanations - boy, is SHE in for a surprise!
ReplyDeleteThat's our Jessica, always trying to rationalize (at least until she discovers the truth about her friends!)
DeleteYes, very mysterious indeed! Great hook!
ReplyDeleteAlso I see you tagged your post with #BeingHuman. I'm such a fan of that show (UK version) and so sad it's coming to an end.
Oh yes, I was very upset to hear the sad news last week! Being Human is my favourite paranormal series, and I am watching it with bittersweet delight now... Still, there's now room for a new TV show set in Cornwall I reckon! Thanks for commenting.
Deletewell described piece
ReplyDeleteWerewolf pack dynamics are always interesting to see worked out. Nice snipppet.
ReplyDeleteThanks and yes, they are great fun to write!
DeleteVery nice hook! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You!
DeleteDefinitely pulls me forward. I am as curious as she is. Great hook!
ReplyDeleteGood, my intention worked, thank you!
DeleteI am all crazy about the wolves at the moment. I wrote a wolf story for nano and I've just started Bitten by Kelley Armstrong to try and satisfy my wolf craving!
ReplyDeleteIt's so nice to see it from an outsiders view for a change - interesting hook :)
Ooh yes, I read Bitten and it was pretty good. I preferred the shape shifters in the Anita Blake series by Laurell K Hamilton, have you read those? Her wolves are seriously hot and very passionate! Thanks for commenting and I'm glad you liked the hook.
DeleteI've only ever written werewolves from the perspective of those who know, never from the perspective of those who are clueless. So this was definitely interesting to read. Little does she know that "submissive" was the perfect word, lol. Great hook!
ReplyDeleteIndeed! I'm glad you liked it, and to be honest I never thought about that aspect when I wrote the book. It all came naturally, since Jessica tells the story. Well, it all worked out perfectly it seems!
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