Hello and welcome to the Hump Day Hook. I am preparing for publication of my fourth novel later this year, and so here is an excerpt from The Darkness of Love. This story is set in Victorian England, and is a tale of vampire tricks, power games and lusty encounters…
Amelia smiled
and gestured to Gregory as she spoke.
“My
good friend, Lord Stockton,” she said, “requires sustenance, Martha.”
The
maid nodded and turned towards Gregory awaiting her instructions. She kept her head down, trying to be as
inconspicuous as possible. Gregory sat
up straight in a smooth, fluid motion, and he fixed his intense gaze on the
young maid.
“Come
closer, child,” he said, “let me see your face.”
Martha
moved slowly closer to the sofa, clearly nervous but too frightened to
object. She stood still, trembling
slightly, as Gregory cupped a finger under her chin and raised her face to his. She stood transfixed by his hypnotic gaze,
her arms falling loosely to her sides.
Amelia moved to stand beside the maid, watching Gregory.
He
gently tilted Martha’s head to one side, revealing the unblemished, delicate
line of her youthful neck, and the beating veins beneath her skin. He opened his mouth, revealing fangs, and
slowly moved in to bite the maid. She
cried out, her body stiffened, and then she fell limp in his arms, swooning
with shock as he drank her blood.
Amelia raised the girl’s arm, revealed her wrist, and broke her skin,
licking the blood sensuously, fixing her eyes on Gregory as she fed. The two vampires watched each other as they
sucked the rich, warm blood of the helpless servant.
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Sensual and seductive - a great snippet on the darker side of vampirism! Love the hook.
ReplyDeleteThank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
DeleteSpellbinding and seductive.Loved it
DeleteGotta love them vamps and their tantalizing gazes. Great snippet. Can't wait to read more about these two vamps :)
ReplyDeleteThank you! Yes, these two are a force to be reckoned with, and I get the feeling they will demand more novels from me soon enough!
DeletePoor girl! But great excerpt!
ReplyDeleteI know, those poor servants did take some stress!
DeleteSustenance thy name is servant - sensual snippet
ReplyDeleteIndeed!
DeleteWow, poor Martha but those two were very sexy! Great hook!
ReplyDeleteThey were! Thank you.
DeleteFab hook, well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you Lucy!
DeleteProper vampires, brilliant!!
ReplyDeletethats a good hook x VEry nice x
ReplyDeleteThanks Kerrianne!
DeleteVery sensual with them feeding together. Great hook!
ReplyDeleteThank you Jessica, I rather liked it myself!
DeleteSince some vampires in books drink and kill and others not so much, I'm wondering whether these vampires are going to kill the poor maid or let her live.
ReplyDeleteThat would be telling... Let's just say these vampires are very cunning and have their strategy.
DeleteHow lovely and sensual. Great hook :D
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteWonderful hook! Loved the way they basically seduced each other over their "meal" :D
ReplyDeleteYes, I didn't realize quite how sensual it was when I wrote it! Thanks for commenting.
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