I was barefoot, and almost slipped down the stairs in my haste. I stood on tiptoes, looked through the peephole and saw the top of Jack’s head. He must be looking down for some reason. I flung open the door, and then gasped in horror. He was leaning against the doorframe, his face covered in blood from what looked liked a large gash above his right eye, and several scratches and cuts on his cheeks and chin. His clothes were dirty, torn, and bloody, and he fell through the door into my arms. Instinctively I tried to catch him, and fell to the floor with a cry, trying to support his weight.
“Jack!,” I cried, “Jack can you hear me? Speak to me!”
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Oh my.... Jake came to see her before dying. That's kind of scary.
ReplyDeleteAh, but is that what really happens? Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteGreat hook, well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you Lucy!
DeleteI love it...very well done, great hook! Does Jack survive? What happened? Does she save him? Hmmmm.....
ReplyDeleteHa ha, thank you Michelle!
DeleteOh no, what happened to him? I hope she saves him. Great hook.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sarah. I think in the end it's a question of who actually needs 'saving.'
DeleteA tense hook there.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteOh, gosh, I'm wondering if he's dead or not...
ReplyDeleteYou'll have to read on to find out... Don't forget it is free on Wattpad!
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