Hello and welcome to the Hump Day Hook. Here is an excerpt
from my second book Love Kills (A Redcliffe Novel)…
“We share the same human body,
Jessica,” Suri coaxed, “And you want the wolf just as much as I do.”
I sighed heavily, still walking
steadily along the tarmac pavement that formed Redcliffe promenade. It was quiet tonight and I only passed a
couple of people, who smiled politely in greeting, which I duly returned.
“Suri, I am so confused about all
of this,” I said in my head, “Please don’t torment me any more. We have the issue with Emily Rose to deal
with, I don’t need you playing with the wolves right now.”
Suri hissed and swiped the air with her paw, as if she wished it were my body.
Suri hissed and swiped the air with her paw, as if she wished it were my body.
“Enough!”
she snarled, “I will kill the vampire when she finally arrives before
us. She is no match for me, no matter
her age and power. I am hungry and you
continue to deny me that which we both desire.”
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Great hook, well done!
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Deleteoooh, an angry animal spirit is never a good thing. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteNo it isn't! Thanks for commenting.
DeleteNever a great idea to piss off the wolf-within. :) Great hook!
ReplyDeleteNope! Actually she's a snow tiger, but she wants the alpha wolf, it makes some good drama... Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteThey are having a complicated relationship, it must be hard never to be alone.
ReplyDeleteYes, and it is all still new to Jessica so she's really struggling!
Deletewow sounds like an interesting take on the wolves..
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