Hello and welcome to the Hump Day Hook. Today I share
another excerpt from my NaNoWriMo 2012 novel, The Vampire of Blackpool.
I have yet to return to the project for edits, but I certainly plan to have
this one published in the future. This excerpt is a conversation between our
protagonist, Meredith Hanson, and a young witch called Samantha Morris.
“Hi,”
she said nervously, “Um, I thought maybe we could talk?”
I
frowned. This was highly irregular.
“About
what?” I replied coldly, and I saw her shiver at my icy tone.
She
swallowed, and when she spoke again her voice trembled.
“Um,”
she said, “I don’t know. Stuff.”
She
waved her free hand vaguely in the air, as though I should understand what she
was indicating. I simply stared at her,
unmoving once again.
“We have
nothing to discuss,” I said in the same cold tone.
The girl
chewed her lip. I tried to enter her
mind to discover why she had taken an interest in me. At first her thoughts were a jumble of everyday nuances, but she
quickly felt my presence, and she threw up a rather impressive shield against
me. I inclined my head, unable to hide
my surprise. She smiled, realising my
reaction.
“Yes,”
she said more confidently, “I might be new to this, but I know how to protect
my thoughts from vampires.”
I smiled faintly, showing my amusement.
I smiled faintly, showing my amusement.
“Very
well,” I said.
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Me thinks he is not gonna be so frosty in the future. Lol
ReplyDeleteActually the vampire is a woman! This story is a rather unexpected lesbian romance... with a few complications!
DeleteAn awkward moment between the two, but I think he sees her differently now.
ReplyDeleteYes indeed, the old vampire can still learn a lot about the people around her!
DeleteHey, she showed him something unexpected, and I think he liked it. His powers are daunting though,and he probably has more in the depths. I can't wait for more of this book!
ReplyDeleteThanks Flossie! Meredith is certainly a powerful vampire character, for all of her mystery and reclusive nature...
DeleteI like she has shown some power against him after seeming a little meek at first.
ReplyDeleteShe is stronger than she looks, and very brave!
DeleteSmart girl, I love that!
ReplyDeleteI like the shift of power within this snippet - well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteWow. Nice. A resister. Always a challenge to even the most seasoned vampire. Nice hook!
ReplyDeleteIt sure is, and it livens things up!
DeleteI love that she surprised him! You go girl :)
ReplyDeleteGreat hook!
Yeah, don't mess with a witch!
DeleteInteresting, I wonder why she was so cold towards the girl.
ReplyDeleteTime will tell... Thanks for commenting!
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